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Great, fun movie for a first try!
The only critique I have for you is that the preloader didn't work. I don't know if that's on my end or what, but when the movie was opened, it immediately went to 90% completion and played that gunshot sound over and over again, at a fast rate.
Might wanna double check it.
As for the movie itself, I'll be eagerly waiting for a continuation of this! Well, if it does continue. This is a stick movie done right!
Keep rockin'!
Yeah, I don't know why it did that, so I took away the shot sound, just so it wouldn't be annoying. One of these days, I'm going to make a completely working preloader.
Nice school project!
I like it! The characters were drawn fairly well, though I would have liked to have seen better backgrounds.
Still, this is a nice rendition from Lord of the Flies. Hope your project gets high marks.
That's pretty much exactly what I thought about it too lol. Oh well, I was a vera vera sleepy and I'm a vera vera lazy lol... heh thanks for the review :)
Hm... Not too bad...
As far as fight scenes in sprites go, this wasn't that bad.
There's only two things I can say that really bug me.
One, is the use of selectable text fields in a Times Roman font. Not only that, but the fonts seemed to clip. If you were using a special font for the flash, I would suggest breaking it down into vector graphics (there's a way to do it in Flash - select any text you have, then go to Modify -> Break Apart, or just hit crtl+b) so it can be viewed on any computer without that font.
Second, is the noticable pause between events. Luigi charges forward, Mario jumps on his head, and then they stop for a few seconds. Then the action continues, and stops for a few seconds. It makes the action and flow of the movie uneven; try and remove those stops so the thing is more fluid.
Other than that, not a bad attempt. Keep going!
Thanks! I'll Do That! (I was using a special font!)
He's aming for the gold! He's aiming! He's - OOOH! HE'S FALLEN INTO THE NAKED SINGULARITY!!
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